Illustrator: Eko Setiawan
Publisher: Dreampath Publishing
Released: June 2, 2025
Format: Paperback, Kindle
Genre: Juvenile Fiction
ISBN: 979-8989912254
Page Count: 44 pages
Price: Paperback $16.99, Kindle $4.99
Age Range: 6 - 9 years
Reviewer: Ellwyn Autumn
Rating: 3 1/2 Lemon Drops
A story of friendship and finding your life path.
I received a complimentary copy of the book from the author and agreed to give an honest review.
Review:
Book Summary:
Kiyomi was born from the seed of a Sacred Dreamlily. One day, a gust of wind transported the Sacred Dreamliy to the Golden Temple, Master Fuji’s home.
To ensure their safety, Master Fuji put Kiyomi and the Sacred Dreamlily in the Sacred Pond of Life. Not long after, Kiyomi befriends Roku. The Dreamlily’s journey begins again, taking the pair on an adventure.
During their quest to return to the Pond of Life, Kiyomi and Roku encounter and befriend more characters who help Kiyomi find her true home and her life’s path.
Opinion:
Kiyomi and the Sacred Dreamlily is a heartfelt story about friendship and the personal journey we all take in life. The basic premise is imaginative and uplifting. A cast of eclectic characters model kindness and fellowship young readers will appreciate.
Kristi Shimada’s prose is charming and easy-to-read. One of my favorite lines is found in Chapter 1 on page 1. “The exquisite blue flower shimmered in a brilliant white light. Her soft petals were subtle yet strong.”
Setiawan’s vibrant illustrations give the story a sweet, energetic feel.
I’d like to briefly discuss a few story details that will improve the reader’s experience.
Kiyomi’s creative shrinking ability, used with the Dreamlily, felt rushed and out of place in the story. A short explanation of its origins would help the reader understand this skill better.
The dialogue is too formal and doesn’t sound like real conversation. Simpler words and fewer contractions would make it more kid-friendly.
I have some doubts about how it ends. To avoid spoilers, I’m not going to reveal what occurs, but I felt it detracted from the story’s enchanting quality.
I give it 3 Lemon Drops!
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