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I titled this as another Story Starter but
after completing the task a more apt name would have been Story Challenge.
It's taken me a few days to write a list of
descriptions for each of the 5 senses for the picture. Sometimes I agonize over
words which then hinders my productivity.
Many authors describe landscapes so fluidly and
with such finesse that I become intimidated. But, I refuse to let that stop me
from working on my craft and sharing what I've composed. I know I need to
improve in this area so that's what I'm doing.
I'm not overly pleased with every description
but at least I did it. To improve my technique, I will continue adding to the
lists I created.
Sight:
Lush green hills surmounted by gray
mountain tops
Thick clouds marbleized with
patches of blue and smoky gray
A river surrounded by hills crowded
with trees
A lake enclosed by hills thick with
trees
A castle sitting on a hill rising
above a small town
The sun is shining down
Sound:
Birds chirping
Water lapping at the shoreline
The scurry of furry feet over grass
Bees buzzing
Smell:
pine
The sweet scents of pine and spruce
A clean wind blew from the south
rustling leaves and tufts of grass
Earthy aroma of dirt and grass
Taste:
The smell of pine and spruce was so
thick the scent clung to my taste buds caramel candy
I chewed on a piece of grass
savoring the bittersweet flavor
Feel:
A lazy wind brushed my face
Branches reached out to tickle my
arms and legs
The sun felt warm on my scalp
How are you at describing landscapes? I'd love
to read your descriptions.
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